Anthony's analytical essay points out the importance of family ties in a novel he read
recently. In the novel, a young boy becomes a teenager and gets involved with a gang,
He is also quite interested in cars, and finally leaves the gang when his uncle gets him a job at a motor parts factory. The first five paragraphs of Anthony's essay summarize the story in great detail. The essay ends with a sentence that states Anthony's interpretation of the boy's decision to leave the gang. What advice would help Anthony Improve his
analytical essay?

Move the interpretation statement to the beginning of the essay, and use the story's details tosupport that claim,

Just read your essay to make sure that all of the sentences How together well and are
punctuated correctly

Explain what parts of the main character's life were the most difcult to help readers feel more
sorry for him.

Read the novel again, and look for information to add about other characters in the story, to
round out your summary