Respuesta :
Answer:
Each of these revisions is acceptable.....
Add a period after ring and capitalize the first letter of she.
Add a semicolon after ring.
Revise ring to ringing.
Explanation:
Answer:
Each of these revisions is acceptable.....
Add a period after ring and capitalize the first letter of she.
Add a semicolon after ring.
Revise ring to ringing.
Explanation: