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PLESAE HELP IN ENGLISH I WILL GIVE BRAINLIST ANSWER AND THANKS
Compare the bold sections of both sentences and then answer the question that follows:
Original: My father disliked sleet, but my father disliked hail more.
Revised: My father disliked sleet, but he hated hail more.
What was done to the bolded section to improve the sentence? (10 points)

A longer phrase was converted to a single word.

A modifier that did not add meaning was removed.

Redundant phrases were eliminated.

Repetitive words were replaced with synonyms and pronouns.

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The sentence had repetitive words replaced with synonyms and pronouns. "but my father disliked..." is too much alike to "my father disliked" so it would get tedious and harder to read.
They replaced it with "but he hated ... " to get some variation.

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